Wednesday, June 25, 2014

Finley's Writing

Finley wrote this great piece after his weekend away in Taupo...

Whoa!  That is some serious fog.  The fog was on the mountain tops - two parts of fog because we went over two hills.  Finally we found some sun!  It broke through the clouds.  It took a long time to get to Taupo.

5 comments:

  1. WOW that piece of writing finley
    your a fantastic writer.
    keep it up finley.

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  2. Well done Finley! I loved your writing. You used some great words like finally and broke and serious! Great work buddy!

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  3. umazing werc finley

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